Fic commentary: Memorial Inscriptions

deslea asked for a commentary on this. I wrote it back in 2005, for a femslash exchange -- the details are lost to me, but I am pretty sure the request was for Dawn Summers/Hermione Granger, since that's what I wrote, and that it was a pinch hit. The key point about the date is that it was before the HP series ended, so I was left to imagine how it would play out, and for the purposes of this story I imagined a pretty high death toll in the final conflict. I'm pretty sure Ron Weasley died in this universe, although I think Harry is out there somewhere.

Memorial Inscriptions
Harry Potter/Buffy, Hermione Granger/Dawn Summers, 1141 words, no warnings
Numerology, demonology, ice cream and bad drama.

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