I'm so glad you like this version -- I think that both Marita and John are still a lot softer than they would have been in your version of the story, but I hope I managed to get something of why that was so.
Thank you again for the beta -- it made a real difference.
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Date: 2007-06-15 08:58 am (UTC)Thank you again for the beta -- it made a real difference.